"Can You Save Me" Drowning in a sea of trouble Air is running out, so hard to breathe The thrashing waves never seem to end Can you save me? Can you take me away from here? Far from the burdens crushing my chest To refuge, to safety A place for me to rest And so you have brought me there In your warm, loving arms I will be My life became wonderful when i first looked into your eyes Thank you so much, for you have saved me |
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yeah um...i juss wrote this right after i talked to my friend who suggested that i join deviantart.com and uh, i know its not the greatest thing. its kinda simple and amateur, but at least it came from my heart....as will every other piece of poetry i submit. of course i'm not a great poet among the ranks of walt whitman or robert frost, but i juss hope its appreciated for its sincerity.
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